Whew

I have made such statements before, but today’s ~7000 words are among the finest I have ever written. The new structure is following the new opening well, and I am now to a good stopping point. I have added one completely new scene to go along with the one I added on Wednesday, and expanded/clarified/ made much better the first 175 pages of the MS (30 of which are new). Small style changes, line edits, and alterations to the character of characters which, in my opinion, make it much more readable.

And now with more ACTION. I hear the Kids like ACTION.

3 more days like this, and I will be as happy as I can be for a while, and very willing to jump to Book two while I wait for reader feedback.

And now for smoothie #2. Do loves me the smoothies.